Writing sampel

We first began coming in to class the next morning and then we had to go to our litres classes. Mr Somervile said that we had to get in to budi’s, my budi was billy topia.

Then Mr Somervile  said to the class to get a towel or a jumper to use it as a blindfold. Now we started to tell the person that was blindfolded where to go.

Some people fell over and some bumped into one another. I told my friend billy to go left but he did not went left so then he bumped into the pole. Then Mr somervile said to give the blindfold to the other person that has not had a turn.

So then it was my turn to get blindfold, he puted the blindfold on        my eyes and then we were on the park. He told me to jump up and holed so then I did it, but first I asked him “is it a monkey bar”? and he said “yes it is a monkey bar, but don’t be afraid”. So then I jumped and I held on so tightly and my heart was pounding and then I stopped and I said “hey this isn't scary at all” so then I started to move on and on then I fell.

Now I learned that blindfolded isn't that bad at all .