Tuesday 10 June 2014

My Holiday Highlight / Lowlight


P1.     “First of all I went to the zoo it was cool I feed the hanstar with letis it was so cute”. They were nebeling it so tiny[they had red eyes]. Ather I went to see the elephant “they were so big” then we went to see the tiger “they had orange and white stripes”. “I asked my mum and dad if I can go and see the tall gruff so we went”. “It was so tall [ “i think that the gruff is taller than a house”]

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