ANZAC Reflection

P1. On Friday at assembly we had to go outside to the Anzac crosses,”but I  don’t mean that we are going to a cemetery we are just going to the crosses so that we can remember the people who died for us and who fought for us NZ. The Anzac people are really important to NZ and us, back in world war two Mr somerville said his granddad was in the war and same as Miss flavills grandad was in the world two.

P2.   

In WW1 and WW2 they had dog’s in the battle they used the dogs for sending messages and the dogs were really good for killing rats. What I mean is that when they dig a trench the dogs kill the rats because it will be enoing if you are shooting but there's rats all around crawling on you and they are seeking. In WW1, they survived by eating little pieces of tiny bread for dinner and for breakfast. When one person is down you need four people to carry the bearer and it will be dangerous because if you are going to the other side with the bearer you might die and get explode by the shrapnel and Mr somerville said his granddad got the shrapnel stuck in his leg.

P3. I learned that the people in WW1 and WW2 are very special and important to us because they saved us and they saved NZ, but it is sad for the people who did not make it home after the war, but they are still the best soldiers for NZ. And remember we will remember them and we are lucky to saved by the NZ soldiers.

I did my sentences properly and added fullstops at the end of the sentences.

I did my vocabulary properly.

I am happy of my writing because.

I am proud that I have putted punctuation in my writing.

I am happy that I changed my words when I start a new sentence

I have realised that I should have more explaining in my paragraphs

I didn’t remember to add some proper writing so next time I will remember to put in proper writing.

The next time I write  I will remember to write each paragraph good.

I have realised that I should have a much longer sentences.   

My goal for writing is to add more explaining. I have chosen this because I did not explain my writing properly.